Would have been more powerful with this line: "About to be SNAPPED in 3… 2… 1…" If you can repost it with this line (and if you're okay with this suggestion of course), it goes straight to the Best Subbed Snaps Pantheon!
In this case, it's supposed to look like she's explaning something very obvious to a child. "It's dying time" would have been good, I agree, but not the way I wanted ;] ("silly" is the most important component!)
Palahniuk007: "In some cases, TRY TO SHORTEN YOUR SUBS!"
tried to include a version of the infamous Catch22-quote ( Yossarian: "Ok, let me see if I've got this straight. In order to be grounded, I've got to be crazy. And I must be crazy to keep flying. But if I ask to be grounded, that means I'm not crazy anymore, and I have to keep flying.") in my first piece of work.